IELTS GENERAL WRITING TASK 2 - SAMPLE ESSAY- 11

 


These days many children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of a television. Some people believe that parents should strictly limit the time that children spend watching TV as it is harmful to their development.
what extent do you agree or disagree?

Kids spend a great deal of time watching television these days and it is considered by many that this is injurious to health and so must be controlled. According to my opinion there are different effects in the excessive use of television and it is better to have a controlled use.

On one hand, televisions provide a lot of fun and educational programs to children which are very effective since they are presented in an interesting manner.  Considering its effectiveness, children will always remember their fun facts tough on television which will be useful. Televisions also telecast a great deal of cartoons and movies which allow children to spend their leisure time with fun and happiness.

On the other hand, televisions also have a lot of content which can have a negative impact on themselves, physically and mentally. Teledramas and films which can influence children in a negative manner will not be very good for children. If children are addicted to such content on television, their mindset will be influenced to act like in the manner they have seen on television. If not guided by a guardian, it is not recommended for children to spend a lot of time on the TV.

According to my opinion, children should not be allowed to spend a lot of time on the television snice it will affect their educational activities as well as their development. And it is always cautious for an adult to accompany their children meanwhile.

In conclusion, televisions have a great deal of information and lessons that children can learn from and at the same time, help them in their development. Is it always important for adults to guide their children when using the television.


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